tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16445652.post8796909301601415635..comments2024-01-09T05:01:15.422-05:00Comments on Jottings and Such: Summer StormAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02604110738567336638noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16445652.post-28833258123109968442009-04-14T19:46:00.000-05:002009-04-14T19:46:00.000-05:00Love the subjects and gerunds--what a great activi...Love the subjects and gerunds--what a great activity for kids to think and write this way! <br /><br />What if you'd also continue the "ing" with the transition line:<br /><br />Scurrying! Scrambling! Getting (or running) inside!<br /><br />And again for the ending:<br />Storm<br />quieting<br />now<br /><br />After reading and re-reading, I think I like the active tense as it seems to be a stronger message to me. It'll be interesting to see what others think! Thanks for sharing all your great verses, Julie!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08730590393236230612noreply@blogger.com